Poetic Form Fridays are made to share various poetic forms. This week, we look at antonymic translation, a very contrary form.

I found a mention of this week’s poetic form, antonymic translation, hidden in the oulipo entry of John Drury’s The Poetry Dictionary. Here are the guidelines for antonymic translation:

Write a poem……then replace words in the original poem with antonyms to change the meaning

For my example attempt below, I started with my caveat poem from a week ago. Click here to read the original text.

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Here’s my attempt at an Antonymic Translation Poem:

“you can’t look,” by Robert Lee Brewer

but do touch
& think
& talk
& feel
free to reveal
what you think
& wish to say

we’ll x out the blanks
if you ignore
or mute what it means
when we analyze
the analytics
point by point
percentages
& clicks
with touching
thinking & feeling

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